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Prologe 01

September 9th, 2010, 4:57 am

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September 9th, 2010, 9:20 am

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Looks cool, I assume you're familiar with Sengoku Musou. A little nitpick would be your grammatical error, misspellings and wrong punctuations.

First panel, you don't need to put a comma in this sentence: "There's time, When..." and small cap the "when".

Second panel: The appropriate sentence would be: "The period where the strong survives." The grammar in the third panel is so wrong. Maybe this is what you meant: "The period where warriors stand up and fight for honor."

Last panel: No need to capitalize the first letters of every word, just the first letter of the first word of every sentence is enough. You spelled "Conqueror" wrong.

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